Resubmission...

Failed my Animatic Assessment and My Promotion Video on my Comics "NPC"

Got a D for both of them...

For Animatic Assessment :

I rushed to finish it to get it out of the way so I can focus on other Assignments.. and I feel soooo bad because I shouldn't rush it.  Also , I forgot because its my own idea/ Story . I can understand what i'm trying to tell in the submission but not for people who don't know the idea/ story , so its confusing for others. Movement and action is Confusing as well and characters . who is the main character?? I need to tell the audience who is the main character and the bad guys!


Missing Shot Numbers on the Animatic ! Confusing Script .


For Promotion Video:

I suppose to fully finish it! but I didn't i only up to the Animatic Part! To be honest , from the beginning of this project , I'm a bit lost on what should I do / show to make this promotion Video....
 Originally , I planned to show lots of concept Arts in my video + my recording (Introdution and  what ''NPC" is about, what i'm trying to tell ) In the End , I don't have enough concepts . So i changed to making a trailer.


Right now, i'm in the middle of my holiday.
Will try to fix it as much as I can